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♥ Windows to Life ♥

When I look out my window,
I see the world
All the hope, all the pain,
All the life unfurled.

When I look out my window,
I see centuries' worth
Of maple trees, flowers,
The entire earth.

When I look out my window
I see caring and love
Bestowed on us
By our father above.

When I look out my window,
I see mockingbirds sing,
People and places
And everything.

Author notes

I saw this so I was like "okay I wanna enter it" so I did and I just thought this up okay I'm rambling hahaha. I'm not normally this crazy. It's what, eleven at night???

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  • Horseartist7
    July 13, 2007
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    Great poem!


  • liduen silver member
    July 11, 2007
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    forgot applause

  • liduen silver member
    July 11, 2007
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    beautiful

  • Namita
    July 11, 2007

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    A very interesting write. Keep it up and keep the ink flowing!

    Luv,
    Candy


  • debilynn
    July 10, 2007

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    beautiful! thank you for entering and for sharing this. keep writing! God bless you always

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