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Unsung Lullabies

Rocking chair
  void of soothing

Teddy lies
  never reached for

Joy
  --sleeps not in cradle



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. . . dedicated to baby Joy

Prompt: Vacant Room

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  • Overcast
    January 13
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    Brilliant!


  • LadyLavender gold member
    July 10, 2007
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    perfect!!!


  • Desire gold member
    July 10, 2007

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    Oy!

    Powerful piece penned~
    Sad emotions brought forth but penned in such a way to bring through in words...
    Take the reader there!
    Thank You for sharing!

    Appreciate Your visit to my work~
    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • lavender shadows
    July 10, 2007

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    awwww. This is so sad. I'm sorry.

    This is brilliantly written. Definitely tugs at the heart.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    July 10, 2007

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    OMG!!!! This is brilliant. Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.

  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    July 10, 2007
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    Your prompt is ~ Vacant Room

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