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close-eyed affection




whispering goodnight;

my lips massaged
"I love you too"
from yours.

(in daydreams,
you did.)







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  • Lavender Butterfly
    July 10, 2007

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    Wow ~ This is amazing. What more can I say - loved it... x Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    July 10, 2007

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    i love the way you pulled on our hearts with that last line. You woke us up as you might have awakened. the use of the word "massage" was so soothing and perfect for the comfort you were trying to bring yourself in the piece. Great job.

  • Lavender Butterfly
    July 10, 2007
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    Your prompt is ~ Vacant Room