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Untitled Pt. II

It's just not the same.
You made me fall for you.
Told me more sweet lies.
Sugarcoated infidelities.

And then you go for her.
Thank you darling,
For shattering all my hopes.

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first real love poem saying how i really feel..

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  • lostinsidemyhead
    August 17, 2007

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    love is such an evil thing at times. You put it out there how the person made you feel. "Told me sweet lies. Sugarcoated infidelities."

    it's really sad... but at the same time, you got your point across. good job!