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Verse for Poets in Book One

Soulful Woman

Thoughts overwhelm my mind
My soul full of the ink that my
heart will use to write

My words tell a story
as feelings spill across the page
Sharing my loves, hurts,
goals, happiness, and dreams

I want only for others to know that
I HAVE LIVED




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  • jacbgd2 gold member
    August 18, 2007

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    Congratulation on your contest win!!!!!!!!!  This is a very lovely piece of work!!!!!!!!!! Very well stated!!!!!!


  • intanglio2ring
    August 14, 2007
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    Glad you did well!

    Mine was DQ'd
    Tang


  • HeavenScent4U
    August 14, 2007

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    agreed that we want people to remember us through our words, especially considering how many, even if just here we have touched great addition to the tapestry. be well and be blessed


  • tawk gold member
    August 11, 2007

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    I so agree with you, we all want to be remembered after we are gone. Wonderful imagery and emotions within. Just amazing


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 11, 2007
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    awsome write. very true and to the point. well written good luck in the contest


  • Whoochi gold member
    July 10, 2007
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    Excellent! Could not be truer...


  • Janice M Pickett
    July 10, 2007
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    True words. Really hits the spot. Thankyou.

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