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Secretly Loving You

I've always loved you but you have never known.
I've been loving you secretly.
Your smile makes me want to melt
in their sight.

I've known you for so long,
been friends ever since.
Now I realize how my heart
skips a beat every time I see you
how much I love you.

I've loved you without realizing it
for such a long time.
Now I realize where I am supposed
to be, right here in your arms
with your lips agaisnt mine.

My eyes and yours meet
and it makes me wanto cry when I
realize your not mine yet.

My heart flutters everytime
I see you or talk to you.

I'm so cold when you're not
near me. Don't let me be alone,
I need you
I've been loving you secretly
for four years now.  Always waiting
for the day when you're mine,
and your hand is in mine.

Your kind green eyes catches mine
and makes me want to just have you hold me
in your tender embrace.

I love you, please let me be yours.

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I wrote this for someone my heart belongs to he just doensnt know it yet.

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  • Shrat
    September 26, 2008
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    This is so beautiful. I really like just how pure it is. Totally awesome.


  • This Is My Story
    May 18, 2008
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    awwww this is so sweet. I know how it feels 2 be like that...


  • Razor-Blade Romance
    January 21, 2008

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    Oooo I wonder who this poem is for ???? I wanna know...
    What a beautiful write hun
    Im sure he'll be very flattered and honoured.
    I would be
    Well Done again


    • Snow White Queen
      January 22, 2008
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      Yeah, its for someone I have known a long time, but is seems as though he'll never notice me.....*blushes*
      Thanks
      Cheyenne


  • Snow White Queen
    July 15, 2007
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    NO!!!

    No u mental nut case!LOL! I dont stare int o His eyes its...well u know I told u about him!


  • Salig Flicka
    July 15, 2007

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    Okies...for a minute I was worried that you might be talking about caleb...*relieved sigh* lucky that his eyes are blue...not green. hmmmm....who is it then? This is a VERY romantic and intimate poem, so it must be someone VERY special. OH! I think I know! *shushes* will ask you laters...keep up the good work!

    ~Avan~

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