Oh. now,
you guys let me go home,
dancing in my bottle,
and the law got me.
gonna be expensive,
though I had my poke
in my pocket
while they fooled
with me,
and it could have been worse.
or better,
depending how you
look at things
when you listen to Winter
or the things
following you.
Before it all went down,
I said my piece,
dancing with you,
yeh,
just dancing with you.
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August, 1996
Written August 24th, 2003
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$750.00 to be exact.....
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and the dui's suck..... lol
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the dancing is the best part.
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"gonna be expensive" I hear ya on that one. LOL
Very cool piece.
Thank you for sharing.
Rodney -
lol, this poem is rather interesting. the word play spins cirlces in my head, thanks for sharing
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oh got a lil tipsy didja? ~~~Val
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