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Verse for Book 1 Poets

Dawn Sellers Elwood


All bound between pages of this book,
our poetry, please come take a look.
We've shared a little piece of our art,
from our pens straight from our heart.
A poet’s rarely discovered in his time,
life's spent in search of perfect rhyme.
Most poets discovered, long since dead.
Appreciate us while we're alive instead.

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  • angelica silver member
    August 18, 2007

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    Dear Dawn, congratulations on your Silver Trophy. I'm very pleased for you and all who have helped to make this project such a success.
    Love Joan


    • DawnBaby
      August 18, 2007
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      Thank you Joan

      I so appreciate your kind comments and applause. Just trying to help make all our accomplishments successful.


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    August 18, 2007

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    BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  How true and well said!!!!!!!! I love this piece!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for sharing and congratulation!!!!!!!!!!!


    • DawnBaby
      August 18, 2007
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      Thank you

      I very much appreciate your kind comments! Be well poet!


  • Frozentearz
    August 17, 2007

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    Congratulations on your award
    truly great to have this a part of such a great thing,
    Thanks for sharing,
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz

    • DawnBaby
      August 18, 2007
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      Thank you!

      Thank you so much for your congratulations, surprised me! Seriously I think Jan through us all in a hat and drew the winners. LOL I appreciate your kind comments, thank you!


  • intanglio2ring
    August 14, 2007
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    Glad you did well!

    Mine was DQ'd
    Tang


  • HeavenScent4U
    August 14, 2007

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    wonderful addition to the tapestry and maybe just maybe, we will be recognized before we are 6 feet under, that i think is the desire of our hearts but if we're not, at least we will have touched at least someone heart along the way be well and be blessed

    • DawnBaby
      August 14, 2007
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      Thank you

      I think it is such a shame that most great poets are not recognized until they are 6 feet under! Hey with this poem they definitely have a choice of styles to pick from


  • tawk gold member
    August 11, 2007

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    Yes wouldn't if be wonderful if we could be famous before we have passed away!! What a wonderful write. So full of wonderful imagery and emotion


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    July 24, 2007

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    Fantastic!!!

    Love it, DawnBaby!!! This is a powerful message, and I'm glad you've thought to enlighten the world!!! Peace, Cyn

    • DawnBaby
      July 24, 2007
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      Thank you

      Thats why I didn't call our Group the Dead Poet's Society! Far too many talented people alive and breathing to ignore. Thank you Cyn so glad you enjoyed it.


  • Sonja
    July 11, 2007

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    Perfect!

    Yes, this could be a great introduction to the book of poetry. I agree with you and with Janice...
    ~Sonja~

    • DawnBaby
      July 11, 2007

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      Thank you Sonja

      You were one of the first people I recall on AP when I joined Sonja. I remember chatting with you way back then. Here I am! Amazing!!! So glad I we are AP sisters You have been a wonderful friend and sister!


  • Janice M Pickett
    July 10, 2007

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    Beautiful Dawn. Yes thats such true sentiment. I think poets alive should be recognised so they feel the pleasure of knowing they were enjoyed and appreciated.


    • DawnBaby
      July 10, 2007
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      Thank you!

      Yes, hopefully to be alive and enjoy a sense of recognition BEFORE I am dead is my goal!

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