My beautiful Amy,
Can't you see...
The pain your actions inflict onto me?
A promise of Love can never be broke
were the beautiful words we once spoke,
Now a heart once filled with such delight
Must endure an endless night.
Is this hell I have fallen to?
because I couldn't get over you,
Or the darkness that dwells in every human heart
Since hate drove us apart.
Why do I search for reasons for my pain,
when you said you loved me - It feels insane.
A dark requiem blows snowflakes in the Wind
knowing in my mind my lover had sinned.
Tell me now, what is my reason for life?
Now that you can never be my wife.
So I start to look for reasons for death,
To find an escape from pain in this final breath.
Hate dwells deep in my heart,
like a masterpiece of black art.
The more you flirt and the more you tease,
the further I get infected by it's disease.
I am not scared to die, I am more scared to live,
To be with a girl who cannot give.
And as the blood falls to my feet and I cease to exist,
I am surrounded of memories of the beautiful times we kissed.
Author notes
This is a poem about a girl who broke my heart.
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I never broke your heart Simon.
Hyde. -
beautiful.
good job -
Nice write,
Thank you
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amazing imagery in this piece...very moving...you can feel the love for her and the pain of her leaving...very well written I enjoyed reading this...my favorite line
And as the blood falls to my feet and I cease to exist,
I am surrounded of memories of the beautiful times we kissed.
again amazing imagery...good luck and thank you for your entry.. -
This is a sad but great poem. The flow was very good and its nicely written, thanks for entering the contest!
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this has a very nice rhythm and flow. well done.
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V.good
Really deep and nice, i know the experience and its horrible, good words matey! xoxbekixox -
Ahh.. I know this feeling. The pain that someone has thrown onto you, seems completely unbearable, and yet, you just can't get away from the person.. oh yes, I know this feeling all too well.. great way to express your feelings.
Ricky
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