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Angelic Alcoholic

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She started drinking before the
dawn of creation, Genesis
had yet to shed light
on her alcoholic intake...

Lord! ...(she spoke)
create me an Earth full
of demon appetites to
quench my sour thirsts.
Populate it with the fallen,
(my brethren)
those impaired enough to think;
to feel bad is better than
to feel nothing, that an empty
bottle is happinesses equivalent.
Medicate my mood; until
my feathers molt from
alcoholic saturation; until I soar
the skies of inebriation and
upchuck bilious clouds, whose
silver linings have
tarnished...
 
Go and give rise to a porcelain
god, who will let me
puke my way
to hell

P.S. Create also, bands of rubber
wrapped in cloth, to holdith
back my hair as I wretch 

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  • Onyx Zodiark
    August 15, 2007

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    LOL! I love your poetry! LOL and you're so good at writing humor which I have found to be actually quite hard lol Great work!

  • soulfultia gold member
    July 17, 2007
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    Ya done good, the funny bone hast been tickled! This made me think of me Navy days...wretching from foreign alcohol! Yikes! But they were metal toilets, not porceline on that ship of mine! I just figure the ocean is holding a bit of me out there somewhere...actually lots of places out there! ha!

  • Recluse Writer gold member
    July 11, 2007
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    I can see I picked the wrong time to try to catch up on my comments...I am trying to forced feed myself here and look what you serve up for me to read. Chilli wags tail and says "Well done Aunt Doc...more leftovers for me"
    Love the hairband pee ess
    Linny


  • soulfultia gold member
    July 11, 2007

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    YOU ARE TOOOOOOO MUCH fun girl!!! Love this ha! Love the P.S. as well. Fabulously funny as always ~Tia


  • YoursTrulyJulie silver member
    July 10, 2007
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    This is so funny. I wish you the best of luck in this contest


  • bethan-gaze gold member
    July 10, 2007
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    This one had me in stitches and I'm still chuckling now! Hubby wonders what I'm doing ... now he's chuckling, too!! You've certainly captured this pic well with this very witty piece and everything about it flows wonderfully with terrific imagery throughout but it's the P.S. that gets me the most ... you are a hoot, Hun! xx

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