aslanlight
Into the ether spirits pour
Forth imaginings flying free
If it is not it cannot be thought
Therefore all that is can be written
Radiated through the fingers
Of the travellers
Seeking truth in poetic form
Passing on the torch throughout time
A contest entry
- Add a verse. for Tapestry of poets world record attempt by Janice M Pickett.
360 points, ended August 17, 2007, 144 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congratulation on your contest win!!!!!!!!! This is a very lovely piece of work!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Glad you did well!
Mine was DQ'd
Tang
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A much better poem...
than poetry I read in school textbooks. I am gaining some insight as to where the poetry comes that appears in school books. True, there are some fine old masters, but otherwise I think the poems are written by the publisher's grandchildren. Your poem is MUCH better than theirs.
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Such a beautiful verse. Full of wonderful imagery and emotions. Just amazing
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excellent~
I loved this...
Especially the part of flying free...
Love it..and best of luck in the contest..
I entered too and do hope you come visit me
Hugs
Susan~~~
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This was Excellent, you pen with indelible ink, This was beautiful and felt spiritual, lovely work ~Tia
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Beautiful Georgia...Thankyou dear friend
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"imaginings flying free" What a great line you have penned! the whole write is great, but I really like that.
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absolutely stunning the way you have created this...tells so much about poets in such few lines....loved the feel of this, almost Berkely-ish...like take it or leave it, its all good....excellent job!
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Hehehe feel silly to ask but what's Berkely-ish? Thanks for such a great comment sis!
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