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All you'd give; was the review mirror

desire to lay
our bodies on blankets,
  beneath the engufing
night sky.

laughing;
you continued.

A contest entry

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  • Lugh
    July 11, 2007

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    I dont understand how you write such powerful short poems!! you are very good! again, the last verse is excellant!


  • Twins 4 me
    July 10, 2007
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    Nice take on the prompt. Very emotional and nice imagery, Thanks so much for entering.

  • Twins 4 me
    July 10, 2007
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    *****Prompt*****

    Stars in the rearview mirror