Zero the Hero
Lightning strikes upon the page
Revealing our inner thoughts
Straggling lines form the words
For our book they are sought
Love and lies fear and pain
Strain at their creative leash
Waiting for the poets eye
To give our verse belief
A contest entry
- Add a verse. for Tapestry of poets world record attempt by Janice M Pickett.
360 points, ended August 17, 2007, 144 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congratulation and BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this write!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for sharing it with the world!!!!!!!
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Glad you did well!
Mine was DQ'd
Tang
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I can so relate to your write. I guess all writer can. Wonderful imagery and emotions. Great write!
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This too. Says so much about what a Poet feels. IN fact what any writer feels. Thankyou.
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This is great. I love the first verse, it grabbed my attention. As it is I love lightening anyway; or did you mean lighting? It says lighting...I'm just assuming you meant lightening.
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changed the typo ..... thanks for the nice comment ....
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