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Footprints

We all leave marks in life and sometimes even after we've gone

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Written August 24th, 2003

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  • ceegeeess
    May 19, 2005
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    Brilliant

    Oh! You are a genius and mature! Your quote make me wander in the sky of imagination and wonder!Yes. you are absolutely correct. It seems to me that your short golden line is like a topic for big debate! Frankly the debate started in my mind immediately after I read it! Thanks dear Nell!


  • ShadowPrey
    August 27, 2003
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    Classic Nell

    This is so sweet and i realy mean that-And i think most of it was due to your lay out of using your own hand writing,it adds a further personal touch to this poem and places the reader inside your head and able to relive the poem instead of just reading it.A stunning piece of work nell

    Shadow


  • poetgypsie
    August 26, 2003
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    what a great poem, the past is only a memory but the future is just a dream this poem was wonderful and i enjoyed very much reading thank u for shareing an i look forward to reading a bit more
    happy reading
    ~B~

  • Odyssey
    August 26, 2003
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    You don't know how much impact just seeing it done in hand writing had for me. I loved this piece.



    One after the other they follow us in life...and one before the other they proceed. We trip forward, we stumble back - and nothing bids for certain we succeed...we only do best to shine incandecently...on our way to the next and beyond.

  • Stephibaby06
    August 25, 2003
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    wow this was great...i really really liked this one. Emotional...and showed alot of symbolism. THanks so much for sharing. I really enjoyed reading this one. Great Write. God Bless you! =D

    ~steph~


  • poetryality silver member
    August 25, 2003
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    Beautiful

    This is wonderful. It has a soothing effect that I find very artistic. Loving the thought of walking on the sandy beach of time, where footprints never fade... Thanks for sharing. I can't wait to pay my membership so I can do these marvelous visuals.

    Much Love,
    Renee Poetryality


  • LadyOfFate
    August 25, 2003
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    good

    AW. This reminds me of a picture. I think it is sweet.:) I like this very much. Thanks for sharing.


  • Roseleaf
    August 24, 2003
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    excellent

    Love this so much so much hope and more easier to embrace
    than the older footprints poem I've read that seems hard to embrace in this modern world sometimes
    Love the way you have set up the wording too

    ~Cheers Pauline~

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