I question
authority.
Parents buckling us
into cradles, seemingly
everlasting.
Protection?
The earth cradles; preventing
us from
knowing the courses we are
to take,
sheilding truth of religion
and death.
A contest entry
- - Quickie Quest - (Reserve Your Gear) by Desire.
525 points, ended July 10, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow! I really like this! I know exactly how you are feeling! The last verse is very good!
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Love the different approach You took with this,
parents cradling with everlasting protection also
another comparison of the earth cradling yet
preventing us from knowing many things...The
courses we are to take...
and the word buckling..in reference to parents...
I keep seeing the seatbelt in a vehicle...
for safety sake...Also envisioning at a carnival..
Go for the ride of Your Life...being buckled into
a seat
Thank You for sharing this
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Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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