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Battle of life

The battle of life is mine
I accept that I may never win though
That I may never be rescued also
crosses my mind

My tears are what shelter me from
the pain
A pain so sharp
That it hurts worse than the blade

I look at the world
and know what it wants from me
Yet I do not want to give in
This is my life
I make of it what I wish

My dreams are hidden
Yet I still see them clearly

The angels waltz around me
The demons capture my gaze
This is troubling me

Yet no more than the power of hate
The way we all are distressed
Is tearing out our souls

We stand alone sometimes
Staring out into a lightless sky
We walk down seperate paths
though we all have the same end

Author notes

screen name: GreatPuppettVassago

The way we perciev our lifes sometimes are skewed and flawed. we know what the end will bring us but we all take different paths to get there. we search within ourselves only to be let down if we dont always get what we strive for.

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  • oldschooldee1
    March 7, 2008
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    Very deep write, I enjoyed reading this very much.. great peace of work


  • SoftlyScreaming
    July 11, 2007

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    i like it.. it has meaning, emotion, life.. and in your case, it sucks.. which is the point i made this particular contest aside from the next round.. anyways, very nicely done, good luck in the contest