In a basin of water,
The surface is still,
The light breaks the surface,
Forcing the shadows to disipate.
The light becomes human-like,
Takes the shape of a man,
Slowly the features shape,
Dazzling green eyes burn into me.
Slender fingers appear on large hands,
The muscles on his body protrude,
His face is strong.
His face is beyond handsome.
He extends his hand in my direction,
Forever staring at me with those piercing eyes,
For a moment our palms touch,
I'm speared with strong, endless emotions.
He speaks to me,
His voice wafting like musical notes,
Our fingers twine, his grip is gentle,
And I realize I know him.
Somewhere across time and space,
We've met and we've loved,
He's been waiting for me,
Just as I've been searching for him.
Author notes
a random poem that came to me while sitting in the library.
Hope You Like! ^_^
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nice this is a great poem
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I like this beautiful poem, I like the way it emerges out of a darkness.
Well done, very good write.
It remids me of that lover I have never had, who I want with all my heart. (I am only 10!)
The last line was very powerful and so was the title.
It was like you didn't know your man but then you did.
Brlliant.
Hannah
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nice
this is good
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i loved this
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WOW!
I love it! I pictured a time, and even now, my man doing the same exact thing to me. Very sensual, or maybe it is because I am anticipating the evening with my boyfriend. Tee-Hee! Whatever the case, I love it and thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest! -
A beautiful and heart felt write. Wonderful flow, it's smooth and glides effortlessly from line to line. The imagery is vivid and nicely detailed. Love it.
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beautiful and heart searching read here
Yes this is very nice and when souls meet the heart tells all
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random poem do ssem to be the best.lovely write
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Awesome!!
Ya kno Im really startin to hate cha!! I loved it cuz of how you let everything fall together. I really like you described his voice as music and the ending how "Somewhere across time and space,
We've met and we've loved,
He's been waiting for me,
Just as I've been searching for him." See you doubt ur talent all tha time and here it is shinin very bright and this poem is so awesome , just like a lot of ur other ones. Well is was wonderful and keep at it.Love ya's Mucho's!!
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