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Late at night
There is a bird
Perched high
In a camphor tree
Her song is beautiful
Melodious, peaceful
Perhaps she sings to her mate
Perhaps to her chicks
Perhaps to the stars in the heavens
I used to think she sang only for me
Until I realized she sings…
Because she can
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"Melodious," i love this word it is so beautiful i have used it in my work as well. I Think that it flows very weel with this poem.
"Until I realized she sings…
Because she can"
Good. Use of the thoughts vs the heart =, i feel a beautiful freedom about this
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Awww its so CUTE!!
If cute sounds like a weird word for the poem then ya I don't know lol I just know the poem is SOO cute!!!!
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So amazing. The imagery and metaphors are great! I love you baby girl!
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... she sings... because she can... What a poignant way to phrase this, to point out that we don't need a 'reason' to be what we are, to share the songs of life, but just because we can.
This piece is a joy to read, to feel, Lily
Dee
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i always wished i could write like you do.
your so good.
i know you get so many comments
and u have proly forgotten me
but your definatly one of my heros lily
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I like this
I truly believe you should enter contest....not for points or for cups..though you would be deserving...but because I think others here might be missing out on the beauty you sing....yes...you sing because you can...just as this song is sung to me...
Malabu
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SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!
Yes, nature has this wonderful way of accepting what ever happens and still there is song and brightness in everything.
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Dear Kevin,
thank you for your wonderful comment on my poem. I appreciate your taking the time and effort to read and reply to this piece.
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HELLO LILY
You are always sincerely welcome, I enjoyed reading very much.
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