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seductress

the picture smiles...
do you dare, hai painter,
make one small blemish?

A contest entry

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  • NoWayJo
    July 17, 2007

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    I really like how you drew the image of this haiku...It was almost as to see and sense the artist and the model and the artwork itself by this haiku.

    Thank you for this wonderful entry to the contest!

    Jo

    • pvenugopal
      July 19, 2007
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      Thank you. Thank you for my first 'honourable mention' in AP. I too felt the winning poem the best.