Harry and Hermione dancing the night away
Hermione and Krum saying goodbye today
He sees his chance to win her heart
He wants their love to finally start
From the first day on the train
As they rode on in the rain
When he first saw her frizzled hair
Her beautiful face pale and fair
He wanted to ask her to the dance
To have some fun and romance
But he made into quite a joke
So her anger he did provoke
He wants her to notice him
Even when the lights are dim
He sees Hermione everyday
Why won't she look his way
So he sits in silence, scared and shy
He has too much pride to sit and cry
So he waits for her to finally see
How in love they can truly be
A contest entry
- Harry Potter by Corinthians13-4.
430 points, ended June 9, 2008, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - This Is Easy As Lovers Go by tigress3737.
600 points, ended September 26, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!
Aawwwwww!!!
that is so cute! i really think that's how Ron feels......though he's too proud to ever admit it. nice job and keep it up!
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Aww, how adorable. Ron and Hermione are a very sweet couple and you portrayed Ron well. Thank you for entering my contest!
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This was BLOODY BRILLIANT! Totally sounded like Ron, and was dang near exactly what I wanted to read. Great job, HP fan!!
**Erin
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This is a really great poem! Very good facts on Victor Krum trying to win the heart of Hermione Granger! Very very well written! And fantastic use of rhyming! LOL!!!!
Best of luck to you in the contest!
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