If you can hear my voice
comin' through your radio
baby then you know
you're the one that I love...
Baby you're the one,
Baby you're the one...
Baby you're that one bright star,
Lighting my way through this dark world,
Leading me through my aches and my pains...
Well stay bright darling,
for our journeys almost over,
but the adventure just begun...
Cause baby you're the one
I'm sorry it has taken so long,
for me to write and sing you this song.
But now I know you belong in my life,
Baby I'd be happy to call you my wife,
Cause baby you're the one that I love,
Your that one bright white dove,
And I know we'd be happy together...
So what do you say,
Baby try it anyway,
You'll someday be happy you did...
Baby you're the one!
Author notes
Option XII
A contest entry
- Songs, Songs and more Songs by Dark Soul Reaper.
360 points, ended October 25, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lyrical Inspirations by Emm Jayy.
525 points, ended November 17, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Writing a song for someone like this is an amazing way to get out your true feelings about them (and you end up with a cute little melody to match!) I loved that you compared her to a star. Sometimes, that seems overdone, but here you went into detail and it ended up sounding beautifully poetic!
Wonderful job and good luck!
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Not bad. I kinda wish you would have told me what kinda love song beat but it still worked. Keep up the good work
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Yes, very good poem. Only problem is I'll probably listen to the song "You're the One" like all night now, lol.
But yes, excellent, and thought-conveying poem.
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Aww, this is really good. You really tell how you feel in it. It's great. Good job with the expression and showing it.
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