JeannieD
With all birth comes labor pains
but the end result brings forth light
New life that can reestablish lost hope
inspiring ideas to set wrongs right
With each stroke of the poet's pen
a new world begins to form
Mere words that are aligned so well
our minds eye sees what they perform
A contest entry
- Add a verse. for Tapestry of poets world record attempt by Janice M Pickett.
360 points, ended August 17, 2007, 144 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Dear Jeannie, CONGRATULATIONS
Great to see so many poets entered to create our beautiful Tapestry of Poets.
Love Joan
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Oh my goodness this is a beautiful poem!!!!!!!! I enjoyed reading it very much!!!!!!!!!! Congratulation!!!!
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wooooooooot wooooooooot congratulations on your award
So glad to have this a part of such a wonderful thing,
Big hugz
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Glad you did well!
Mine was DQ'd
Tang
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beautiful addition to the tapestry my dear. birth, new beginnings, just like our poetry. very beautiful metaphor and heart felt words here. be well and be blessed
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Such a unique and true metaphor. Wonderful imagery and emotion. Such a wonderful contribution to the Tapestry of Poets
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Jeanie this is beautiful. Comparing the poet to the beginning of life. Wonderful correlation. For once a poet pens the words that fill them...they have created something new that not only brings life to themselves but life to those who read it. Bravo my friend...
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Interesting metaphor and so true. I am struggling to write something right now, so I know what you mean. Keep up the great work!
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I am running out of things to say. each of the verses are so beautiful and so special for our project. THANKYOU
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Fantastic Job Jeannie, a unique and wonderful take on the pen of a poet. Excellent
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