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farewell to summer

a weeping willow
waving farewell to summer
dances in the breeze























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  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    March 13, 2008

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    HOODWINKED !!!

    Fifth Dove, I like the contrast found in this poem, weeping...dances. A fond farewell for a cherished friend. Good strong imagery, well done.


    You have been Hoodwinked by the Poetic Bandits today because WE CARE!

    Dennis (Gray Elk)