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Healing

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The roar of the waves as they race to the shore
sizzling as they crash on the shell emblazoned sand
Salt misted incense meanders on the breeze
mischievously fluttering through the window where I stand

Seagulls and sandpipers serenade playfully
as they search along the beach for a leftover snack
Palm trees flex their feathery fingers in the wind
pelicans decorate the sky with their silhouettes of black

Stretching I inhale all these sights and sounds
letting the soothing sensations caress healingly
Reminding me life may not really be so bad
as I surrender to nature's pleasures willingly


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  • Namita
    August 4, 2007

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    Very gentle and relaxing. Thanxx for entering. I wish you luck.

    Luv,
    Candy
    Contest Holder

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 10, 2007
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    Thank you for your most beautiful entry, Josephine


  • Whoochi gold member
    July 10, 2007

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    very calm and serene..could envision myself opening this window at the "shell-embazoned sand" and all the other things that awakened my senses in this captivating gorgeous paradise...well done...


  • Puppydog gold member
    July 10, 2007
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    SO SOFT AND RELAXING!!!!!!

    What ever could be more beautiful than this!


  • tawk gold member
    July 10, 2007

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    This is so beautiful and serene. What wonderful imagery throughout. I see a gold in your future Just excellent in every way. Good luck in the contest

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