In a room full of wonder,
a sky full of view.
I see everything,
everything but you.
Feeling the breeze,
against my skin.
This is the best,
I have ever been.
Seeing the palm trees,
sway in the wind.
I dream of a place,
where no one has sinned.
A place full of beauty,
caring, and love.
A place like this,
a place unshoved.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired. by Poetryintheblood.
350 points, ended July 16, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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The slight rhyme is well done. The meter is good. I liked it, it seemed to fit well together.
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wow I really liked this, we have improved a lot since we have been on this website. Gosh though i feel like we never talk anymore.
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, Josephine
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