I sat to write a poem.
Nothing comes out from my pen.
Suddenly the poem is born by itself,
because every poem has its own life.
A contest entry
- Add a verse. for Tapestry of poets world record attempt by Janice M Pickett.
360 points, ended August 17, 2007, 144 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congradulation on this contest win!!!!! I enjoyed reading this write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Glad you did well!
Mine was DQ'd
Tang
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yes, from no life a single word sparks a poem and we weave our words from there
nice addition to the tapestry. be well and be blessed
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This describes how the art is created when the time is right (write) not when we wish to force it. Well done.
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I too believe that every poem I write has it's own life. Great verse, wonderful imagery and emotions
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yup, "every poem has its own life", very very true, I agree. Nice verse for the AP book
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Thank you for your comment my dear.
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"because every poem has its own life."
Nicely said and well done bhaiaa.
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yes every poem does have it's own life. I made a couple of small changes Sami....Noting I changed to Nothing and was born I chnaged to is born. Thans for writing your verse
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Thank you for your comment.I made those corrections.
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This is so true. Yesterday I started out to write a poem and it took on its own life and direction...really odd but that's poetry I guess. Great job.
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noting should be nothing.
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