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Throw away your
Kama Sutra.
Toss out your cologne.
Blow out all the candles,
You don't need them on.
All I want is
Y O U
Above me naked,
Going down,
Your scent filling my nostrils,
Your silken hair
Upon my yearning thighs,
Your tongue aflutter and
Delving deeper
For my joy;
To feel the warmth
Our bodies make
When we join
In our embrace.
Whip me to peaks of delicious meringue.
Let me taste the perspiration
Rolling down your face,
As it drips onto my lips
Consuming every inch.
Gently rake your nails over my breasts,
Bite my thighs and lick away the glue
From my waiting envelope.
Feeding off the glow
Our movements make,
Tingling exhilaration titillates,
Radiately shocking all my
Dark moistened places
Spread open to your
Throbbing.
I want you
To tie me to the bed,
Fill my mouth with you.
Make me moan for mercy as you
Plunge and plunge again.
I want to come.
Please
Make me quiver, make me scream.
All I want is
Y O U
Catching fire and combusting
With me.
In a list
A contest entry
- Erotic Pleasures by Jonathan Wikkins.
525 points, ended June 1, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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HOT HOT HOT!
Very hot piece you've penned here!
good luck in my contest, and thanks for entering!
mike, aka jonathan wikkins -
I was interested before, but now I am really impressed. Excellent work.
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Well...a...ahem...you're hot!
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Hmmmmmmmmmmm, you know I have always thought your erotica was some of the best here, this was an eye-opener for me
I know thats what they wanted for this contest, and they said yours wasn't hard enough for them, well, I thought this was great, I would much rather use my imagination, when it comes to reading erotica
Good luck in the contest,
Karen
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Dark moistened places
Spread open to your
Throbbing.
-Loved these lines, though i agree w Judas, this could be so much more...dirty...more hardcore, it's tame, but so very nicely put together...i didn't use my imagination..then again ima pig and i dont need to
Nyx... -
This is subtle, a little more so than what we were looking for. However, it is so well presented, it most assuredly isn't out of the running.I used my imagination a lot here and that is always a good thing. Thank you for entering.
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Hot dang! Wow, hot dang! My kind of woman!
hugs,
jim
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