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Toxic Lies

Toxins from Lieing seep out my mouth
And i know i've reached my limit
I'm giving it my all
To keep these lies in tact
But there seems to be an overflow

SO cross my heart and hope to die
Tonight through the love and sighs
and what is written on my face and eyes
Baby you never knew I was one for lies

Keyboard confessions on an Internet diary
Everybody knew but you
Sweet lies came from my mouth
And that taste was so addicting
I lie some more for my sugar high

SO cross my heart and hope to die
Tonight through the love and the sighs
and what is written on my face and eyes
Baby you never knew I was one for lies

So now you know my little white lies
They formed the biggest blackest of all
Baby doll
You're not the only one I've said "love" to
Surprise Surprise This time it's not the guy

SO cross my heart and hope to die
Tonight through the love and the sighs
and what is written on my face and eyes
Baby you never knew I was one for lies

Author notes

♥ dancing on your grave ♥ option #8
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  • rsheafer
    October 2, 2007
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    Nicely written. I like the sing-songy approach for such a dark topic as this.


  • rsheafer
    September 18, 2007

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    Aaaaand

    I take it back. Just saw your other poem, in which you did, indeed, include your AP name in the author's notes.

    ..... So I'm a fool.
    Thanks!

  • rsheafer
    September 18, 2007
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    Name in the author's notes in this and any other poem you enter.
    Por favor.


  • On Frail Wings.
    July 10, 2007
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    i really like this one. i think it would make for a great song!


  • Coco Mara
    July 10, 2007
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    I like your poem


  • MoonlightBeam
    July 10, 2007
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    Wow, this is amazing

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