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-Twisted Angel~

Lit up

      on liquor wine

  far from

        a soul divine

Enlightened once

    but tore a wing

when I got drunk

       I'd eat the thing

And I have powers

    to slurp a wave

but I'll be damned

        I can't behave

So all I know

means nothing much

    when I get hammered

I cuss and such

With all the booze

    I'm drunk on love

yet trouble I am

    the maker of

-T w i s t e d

A n g e l~

Author notes

Hope this makes here laugh a bit, atleast smile~
Thanks for reading me, much love, Timothy~

A contest entry

Wanted: Drunken Angel Poems by Amera. 1500 points, ended July 15, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

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ten thousand cicadas
July 16, 2007
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Hmmm, very interesting, Timothy!!! Some nice rhymes and cleverness dispersed throughout.
Amera
July 14, 2007

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This is great! Fast hard hitting and it rhymes! Well done and original. Good luck in the contest.

Love,
Amera ♥
Dalaney
July 14, 2007
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Well, this certainly made me smile
I like your style, you darling Twisted Angel...
Love, lane
Asdzaa Nadleehe
July 9, 2007

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lol too cute.I like it.. very fitting for the photo..
she does look like shes being a bit sassy..lol
Peace..
Best wishes with this entry..
~A~
PoetsAngel
July 9, 2007

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Timothy, this is great! It mage me laugh a lot, not just smile, thank you for entering this wonderful contest Amera posted for me Good luck

Cathy♥
coffeeangel316
July 9, 2007
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I love it this was such a good write. You always amaze me.
Kiki-Massacre
July 9, 2007
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this poems so amazing...i love it♥