oceans deep stilled as
she comes forth
fresh born of the foam
droplets falling from her skin
become precious stones
shining in the sand
what wonder is this?
feathers glistening in
the cool dawn, yearning for flight
veil torn asunder
the very skies resounding
dazzled by her light
A contest entry
- INSPIRATION by LadyLeviathan.
385 points, ended August 22, 2007, 11 entries
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beautiful piece! i loved it! great job on this contest! and thank you for entering! good luck to you =]
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quiet thunder lady
after a picture like that for inspiration I had to try hard!
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This touches softly and leaves you wanting more...I could see the pictures that words have penned
you are very good! Thank you
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can't touch this
thanks for the rose and your nice comment, just trying to do justice to the theme given
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WOW!!!!!!! Awesome and i must say your title is just amazing. I quite liked ur title. Well done.
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thank you shapla, must confess that i stole the title from aphrodite who is also known as the foam-born in greek
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