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Sand

You feel the sand

Its Coming up your hand

You start to cry

But you don't know why

 

"Please, I didn't do anyting to you" You Plea

But He's not listening to you

He's thinking of sadistic ways of making you scream

But he doesn't know your thinking of ways too.

 

But your ways are to get out.

Alive.

To scream and shout.

But still survive.

 

You see it in his eyes.

His eyes hold pain

And unheard cries

And much disdain

 

Your eyes were hard

Your mask put up

To stop the emotions that bombard

Your mind that were starting up

 

"Your mine." He growled.

That was all he said.

"Bite me." You said. He scowled.

"Shut up" He yelled before hitting me hard on the head

 

 

 

'Just get to your happy place

safe inside yourself

 

 

 

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  • Imaginary-2-you
    February 2, 2008
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    i like the poem where did you get your Inspiration to write it


  • Dark Magician
    August 6, 2007
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    kewlness and sorry

    This was pretty good. It had good description and word choice that made it very interesting. However, I am very sad to say that I have to dq you for not following rule #9 "Please follow this rule: I don't want to dq you for this. Please put the option number and "House on Haunted Hill" in the authors comment box." Sorry but a rule is a rule.