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Verse for book one

Ruth Kephart - USA

His pen becomes his magic wand;
One wave and even he
Is transported through time and space
Within his poetry.

He dares recall his younger years,
The joy, but too the pain
As words become a bridge, a path,
To things he can’t explain.

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  • intanglio2ring
    August 14, 2007
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    Glad you did well!

    Mine was DQ'd!


  • HeavenScent4U
    August 14, 2007

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    i have seen your name around ap's hallowed halls but never read anything of yours i don't think but i'm glad i stumbled across this your words describe well the minds of us poets here wonderful addition to the tapestry. be well and be blessed


  • Star Shine
    August 14, 2007
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    Nice, mystical, emotional and real.


  • JinSays gold member
    August 14, 2007
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    I love this write, from start to finish. Good luck in the Gwr contest!


  • tawk gold member
    August 11, 2007

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    I could so relate to your write. Such wonderful imagery and expression. I so enjoyed reading


  • macandrew
    July 31, 2007

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    I found the second verse to flow much smoother than the first though both bring me much joy.

    John


  • Janice M Pickett
    July 10, 2007
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    Thanks Ruth. Again such true words. I am loving this.


  • sunny day
    July 10, 2007

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    Ruth, Lovely are the words that we use to create the verse that flows through the halls of AP and yours are beautiful as usual. Thank you for sharing with all of us. This is lovely indeed. Love and God bless, Joyce

  • piccola silver member
    July 10, 2007

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    Oh another set of gem-like verses. I keep reading and reading and I'm so proud to be among all of you in this project.

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