listen closly to what i say
for you'll see things from her way
a litte girl who thinks nothing
just wants some one to love her, something
she cries alone at night
and cant sleep from fright
she's been thorugh hell and more
after her Father walked out that door
she'd bite herself and claw so hard
she'd cut real deep knowing her life was barred
she set her own experation date
even then she was too late
for this girl needed someone to listen
some who she can trust to let in
she'll look in the mirror and just cry
saying how ugly she was and how she wanted to die
this little girl is only eight
and when she was found it was too late
only to find her open her eyes
and finally just realise
her may have to live with strife
but she's too scared to end her life
Author notes
i wrote about option four and option 2 and option three all in one lol Also today I went out shopping with my Mummy
A contest entry
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450 points, ended August 2, 2007, 9 entries
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Hmmm... this seems a bit cliche to me... And some of the rhyme seems very forced... In my opinion, just okay. I donno this didn't really do it for me, but that's just my opinion. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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