The build up of it all
the towering hight of all my unexpressed anger
for it all to fall from its beaten cage...
my unexpressed anger, my rage has fallen on you
because my heart so desperately needs to bleed
and my emotions need to rage...
my rage makes me feel what no one else can bring...
through my rage death may come and my
enemies will fall
unexpressed anger is the word i use to replace the
words that makes me lust death 'rage' is the
word that makes my blood boil 'rage' is the
word that my enemies hear
through it all everyone will hear the screams that
will echo through the forests where no one is near
no one can stop this 'unexpressed anger' its just
rage un-controlable rage
when i hear the thirsty word no one may help you
rage...
A contest entry
- 3 Part Contest: Part 1- Rage [[BIG POINTS]] by GiftedPsychosis.
1500 points, ended August 7, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very emotional, very good. I love the ending.
Great job and good luck in the contest! -
hahaha this is super coolies :]
♥--T.R;
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This says me to a Tee. (I never understood that saying) But this is good, the emotion in this flowed quiet steady.
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This says me to a Tee. (I never understood that saying) But this is good, the emotion in this flowed quiet steady.
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i forgot my applause.
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DEEP, VERY DEEP, That was awesome i really liked it i liked the flow of the poem better than anything but it is a good poem. and thanx for the comment. hopefully we'll both make it to part two. good night lil sis. keep writing these awesome poems.
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