Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Angel of Truth

She stares into the distance
Contemplating her life
Wondering how she got here
Wondering what to do next

She kneels in the sand
Naked, scared, and alone
No one to see her beauty
No one to stop her tears

She huddles in the dark
Wishing they would see
But they won't understand
But they don't truly see

She reaches out to them
Wondering how to help
They don't feel her touch
They don't sense her presence

She pushes her hair behind her ears
As she rises from the ground
She flies into the sunset
She flies into oblivion

An angel of truth
Trying to set the people free
But they won't accept it

So she kneels in the sand
Naked, scared, and alone

Author notes

Very inspiring and beautiful picture. I hope this fits what you're looking for...

Enjoy!

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 6, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    Very nice write

    I wish I could have seen the pic this was written for


  • LadyLeviathan silver member
    July 10, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    beautiful and very well written! i had such a hard decision on picking a picture but you were definately inspired by it! great write. good luck in my contest! thank you for entering!


  • Celticjedi
    July 9, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Awesome job sis! Very beautiful and descriptive! Been waiting to read more of your sensational talent lol! It keeps getting better and better. Keep them coming Chels, love you tons!
    Hannah