I Want You~
I know you are my fire, my own twin flame,
we write, we think, we speak and breathe the same.
You give me all your wisdom and advice;
you ask me to look deeper, thinking twice.
I know the Universe is in control;
I only played my part, fulfilled my role.
My eyes are clear and filled with ecstasy;
I saw beyond the snares that threatened me.
On New Years Eve I prayed so hard for you.
I saw you on the silver screen so blue.
Your power and attraction puzzled me
but now I realise you are my destiny.
I know that then I thought it was a dream,
the feeling, first evoked, unreal did seem
but we communicated soul to soul
and poetry brought forth a love untold.
A vacuum we created, lost in time
with your prophetic words and me with mine.
Though we both knew amazing change was near,
we both accepted what we felt sincere.
We met in summer - daylight all around.
You never spoke - you never made a sound
and yet we knew each other's every thought.
We loved, we laughed, there was no need for talk.
T'was dreamlike how we melted into one,
each reaching for the other in the Sun.
Then, later, in a cozy firelit room
your arms enveloped me - I was consumed.
We lay beside the fire and planned our dreams
with musical and wild poetic schemes.
We know they will come true, because they must
as long as love is based on Faith and Trust.
Sharon Corr, July 9th.2007
In a list
A contest entry
- Only Members of Hugh Wyles Fav Group Contest: #15; Love, Love, Love by huguenauties.
889 points, ended July 13, 2007, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful,
My darling friend, your words float from your soul on heavenly winds~ I gaze upon this lover's page and see straight through, oh how I love the very heart of you... How many times can I say I love thee, I am the words, you are the tune, play me.. I adore you tenderly baby, and with you I shall forever be.
Wow, this piece inspired me.. Love ya Sharon, Congrates on the silver sweet soul. 
-Timothy
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Dearest Timothy,
You give me love, you give me peace on earth. You help me cope with this heavy load, as we Penn from our heart and soul. I’m glad you took hold of my hand, and in our words, others feel and understand. Thank you my soul brother, I cherish your words, and they remain forever in my heart. If not for you, there would be hundreds of love songs lost. We are tying our best to make everything succeed. I love your heartstrings, please keep on playing me as your tune. I know we can never lose. We must share our love, for our hearts have many rooms. I love you, and deeply appreciate all you do. I am looking forward to the future within a loving heart. You’re the words, I’m the tune play me, eternally. Namaste Blessed Be, ~XXX Hugs, Love, Kisses, Sharon~
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Dear Sharon Congratulations on winning Silver for your beautiful poem "I want you" I love it so much and it still touches me deeply.
Love Joan
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Dearest Joan, Your are a true example of a loving, and giving blessed heart and soul. My My, how I love to see your warm beautiful smiling face, grace my page. How I love you. We both write on similar themes, Twin Flames, and the true meaning of Heaven-sent love. I FEEL the pleasures and pain that we celebrate in our God given twin flames. Heavenly Blessings on your exquisite Sonnet, Spirit Lovers- winning the Gold. Moreover, I send my heartfelt Congratulations to you Joan. How I love to be here on this road filled with pearls of wisdom from the Lord Above. I hope you stay close by my side for all of eternity. All the best to you and yours, Namaste Blessed Be, ~Love Sharon~
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Congrats on the silver! I guess your muse came back at the right time.
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Dear Yemassee,
Thank you, my friend.
You touched my heart today,
and made my day brighter
in your own special way.
I feel honoured to win the silver.
And I want to personally thank everyone in the group for their support on I Want You~ Namaste Blessed Be, all my love to you and yours eternally, ~Hugs, and Love, Sharon~
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Faith and Trust - excellent ending to a marvellous poem. These are the foundations that love needs to grow strong and lasting. The verses have so much imagery, very good!
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Dear MargaretG, Thank you very much. I appreciate your thoughts and applause. It's lovely to be here with all of you. ~Love and Hugs, Sharon~
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What a lovely poetic theme. And this well versed piece gives such love a sacred feeling.
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Dearest Suseann,
Thank you for your love support kindness, and applause. You’re a dear treasured friend, always here to bring good cheer! I agree this is a sacred feeling. This is our simple story. The search for love, in all its glory. The fire within twin flames. The message of eternal love sent from above. ~Love and Hugs, Sharon~
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Dear Sharon, Beautiful, simply beautiful. I have a big smile on my face for I know how you feel to love someone so completely and to know you have that Spiritual connection that goes beyond time. I feel that way about my Darling Heathcote. We have shared many lifetimes together just as you have with yours.
And if you truly believe in miracles and the power of the universe it will become a reality and you will be together. A very exquisite poem dear Sharon.
Hine.
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~Dearest Beautiful Hine~ As Heathcote’s Wife, you’re a Goddess Divine. And how you both love each other is beyond space and time. You have warmed my heart knowing I have placed a big smile on your face. I truly believe in miracles and the power of the universe. This has been my lifetime quest, and here in this love song, I’ve given my best. And in all the letters we’ve written, the truth is here to behold forevermore. Je’tadore! Thank you kindly for your love, applauses, and deep spiritual insight, Hine, your love is pure delight. ~Love and Hugs, Sharon~
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Dear Sharon, Oh my! This certainly is a wonderful poem that is filled with yearning to be with the one you love. If you keep on believing it will happen.
Beautiful.
Jenny.
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Dearest Jenny, Thank you kindly for your applauses. In this moment, I know what it means to get lost within someone's eyes. I just know that I've known him somewhere before.... somewhere in time. He is my future past. I know in eternity our love shall last. ~Love and Hugs, Sharon~,
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So who is he? Finding the other person to be a twin flame would seem to be a good flame...better than fire and gasoline I'd say...though hopefully your relationship is just as combustible.
Ah such passion, when in the throes we could write 100's of poems on the subject...but when they annoy us to take out the trash or pick up our socks...we'd write poems of a different sort.
It's a very romantic and if based on real events, I wish you the very best.
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Dearest Yem, who is he? This is the moment for us to shine. Who is he? Question? You can find him in my rhyme.
Now all our stars align. “When you meet your soul mate,
this person will have an instantaneous effect on you.
A soul mate is someone who makes your knees go weak
and takes your breath away. With but a single glance
they lessen your burden, and with a smile, touch your heart.”Thank you for your caring thoughts and best wishes. Standing in our dream is a magic feeling. ~Love and Hugs, Sharon~,
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Wow
That is so inspiring I would say I feel most of these things for the man I love. but Im waiting ya know. you did an awesome job I really like it.
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Dear Briana Watson,
I fly and give up the summer sun for him
I listen to the whispers of this hymn
Beyond being, inscribed as summer rain
You heal our hearts forever blue
Thank you for sharing your heart, and being one with our love. We shall forever remain as one heartstring and timeless melody beyond the seven seas. ~Love and Hugs, Sharon~ ,
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It has touched me deeply, I cried.
Dear Sharon,
Your poem is so beautiful and brought tears to my eyes for the beauty within it. I FEEL the emotions in your magnicent words. It's been a long time since I have been so deeply touched by a poem as I am with this. It is magnificent.
Beautifully written Sharon from your heart and deep within your soul.A very spiritual poem binding two souls together for eternity.
I am a great believer in past life connections and meeting up with your soul mate in each rebirth.
I am going to bookmark this so that I can come back and read it often.
Wonderfully written my friend and I'll look forward to reading more of your works of art like this.
Love Joan
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Dearest Angelica, my life shall be “Forever Autumn”
Because he is not here, not near.
I cried when you said you cried.
Oh Angelica, how your words touch my immortal soul.
The worth of love is more than gold.
Forever more your love
Remains upon my shores.
He is my soul mate
He is all I ever see
Yet, he remains far across the blue sea.
Someday I will be flying with him eternally.
Dearest Angelica it has been our lifetime quest
As I lay my weary head upon his soulful chest.
I am a believer in past lives, and I have found
each of us knows deep within, that eternal love shall win.
This is a true story about two blue jays dancing gently
And how our eternal love blossomed and came to be.
All my love to you and yours, gracefully.
~Love Sharon~
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Dear Sharon,
Of the many poems that I have read from your romantic pen, this I consider to be your best.
The expressive intermingling of spiritual and mental love with constrained hint of physical fulfilment is deftly contrived. The blending of souls and hearts through the affinity of poetic and artistic thought in no way conflicts with the communion of flesh. The positive ending in which twin aesthetic natures look to their future as soulmates in the security of their love is beautifully expressed.
Thankyou for this superb entry which, I hope, fares well in the voting. I am bookmarking it. I love the illustration!
Applause, love and hugs, XXX Hugh (R.)
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Dearest Hugh, I consider your praise sacrosanct and a lifetime honour! I am very humbled and blessed deep within your thoughts and supreme creativity. I feel redeemed in you positive influence, I dance in thankfulness. You my King remain the master of courtly romance. A compliment such as this is a divine kiss poets dream of. Ah, my new old friend how I long to soar and fly, unto the newborn skies. Poetry is the union of the sun and the moon. In my journey, this is the timeless rebirth of two soul mates again uniting on this physical plane. This poem truly reflects the love in my heart and soul. I searched the seven seas for this illustration to share my heartfelt appreciation and dedication. I do believe in soul mates, eternal love always finds a way. Namaste Blessed Be, to you and yours eternally, ~Love and Hugs, Sharon ~
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