My feet touch the sand that I may live among you;
as wings fade I must set to task,
beyond my inadequacies.
B
e
y
o
n
d the Devil’s desires.
I have my faith and I will find traveling about you
those to gather what I lack,
apart from self.
A
p
a
r
t of the greater good.
Do not fear me as I gaze deep within your soul;
you are more than what you wish to hide
within this life.
W
i
t
h
i
n all destinies.
A contest entry
- INSPIRATION by LadyLeviathan.
385 points, ended August 22, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pimp up my picture inspired poetry by leander.
400 points, ended January 31, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great poem and interesting way to put it actually
Once again you've managed to capture great imagery within the words!
Leander -
Congratulations on this silver. This was so good, I am so pleased to see an award. ~Pam
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oh wow i absolutely love your backround! THE POEM WAS AMAZING! it adds so much to see what you are describing as well! good luck in my contest! thank you so much for entering!
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ah... Thanks - most odd! I hope all is well and thanks for the gold
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thank you for the honor of silver it was a wonderful image to work with. congrats to all
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Very Good
Oh my, you really have come about with so much creativity in this piece. Your form is amazing and adds so much to the flow of this verse. "A Part of the greater good" - these words are strong and rise in your presentation.
I am quite moved by this piece. I wish you good luck in this contest. Very very creative and well done my friend.
~Pamela 
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Excellent
Wonderfully creative form and very effective with this poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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