I've been hurt in my past.
By you.
It's not fun.
I thought you loved me.
You promised that you would never hurt me.
Well, I guess we know how that turned out.
Now,
Im gonna protect my heart from you.
Its been torn into too many pieces.
Its too broken to mend.
And those promises you made?
Well, lets just say im never trusting you again.
And im going to say one thing to you,
and only say it once.
Dont you dare hurt me again.
If you do,
be prepared.
You might not be alive much longer.
A contest entry
- Open! Open!! Read this!! haha by Dark Angel Reborn.
390 points, ended July 20, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - *L.o.s.t, H.u.r.t.&&C.o.n.f.u.s.e.d* by Logans-Mommy.
500 points, ended August 2, 2007, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - dark, strange, love poems wanted here!!! by Just waiting.
300 points, ended August 22, 2007, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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awsome piece. i really liked it alot and i can relate to the poem for the most part. good job with this piece and thank you for entering my contest. good luck.
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good way to take your anger out.
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This was kind of...creepy. It was good though. I liked the threatening tone in it, especially in the last part. Good job and thanks for entering my contest.
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