Endless love you do imbue,
Words with hues beam tender true
As hearts sing songs in the rain,
Melodies sometimes feel pain.
For emotions weep in-depth,
Still you love with every breath
You shine your candle sincere,
Weary souls you show you care.
I see your poems genuine,
Angel art inscribed divine
Love mends many broken souls,
And your own longs to be whole.
As you hold truth in your heart,
May wisdom never depart
I pen to show you I care,
Sending love, my daughter dear.
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poeticweaver (AP Dad) Penned for my AP daughter.
Background By : PerfectImperfection
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A contest entry
- 4 my favorites only by oldphotosonlybringt.
460 points, ended July 10, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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OMG
this was a fabulous tribute
She sounds amazing. I am sure she was truely honored
by you kind words
Love this
Delila
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this is so good. I really love this. You show your heart so magnificently. what a write. Luv, Trace
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I don't mean this in a bad way...but this poem made me feel really, really sad...however, not going into that. The point is, I got a lot of feeling out of this. A beautiful gift to someone you obviously love very much...Good luck in your contesty thing!
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Such beautiful words for your AP daughter...She must be so excited by this thank yo so much for just being you
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omgosh..
thank you so much, i love it more than you will ever know.. i am so feel like a big baby right now,,yah i am crying, i mean today was crazy and the last 2 houres were so messed up and to have you go back just to put such a lovely background for me means so much andtouches my heart thank you soo soo soo much..all my love <3 -
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Sweet
I'm so glad you enjoy the poem I wrote for you...and I'm glad I could play a part in cheering you up a bit. I know you've been going through some tough times...but hey, that's what an AP Dad is for!
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Dear brother, this is so beautifully sweet, tender, and loving. Just like you to pen something so heartwarming. Your words touch my heart, so I'm sure they will caress the heart for whom it was penned. This was just what I needed to read today. My heavy heart now has a smile within. Love you Brother-O-Mine! Well done, indeed.
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oo dad i loved it so much...
i would have to say these two lines got me though:
As hearts sing songs in the rain,
Melodies sometimes feel pain.
i loved those lines and i love the whole poem,
thank you so much it was so lovely <3
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