As the sea shows talking tides
My arms settle the hand to sand
As the moon drives the water
I've found the back of the world
And the end of the alter
We shall rest
Bare and far from here
Where secrets invent
The tongue of God
And the breeze of tears
Darling, I've come
To revive your eyes of overcoming
The wings inside your dreams
The seams inside these winds
In tasting the earth
I've discovered the cure
For satisfying myself
And forever changing man's poseur
Of infectious beauty with
Sleeping a slumber of
Placid trees and rolling thunder
Author notes
She talks a considerable dream to sleep.
A contest entry
- INSPIRATION by LadyLeviathan.
385 points, ended August 22, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Seeing as I entered a sleep poem in your contest, I though I'd read yours, and I have to say, it is brilliant, and I love it. So much beautiful imagery and powerful use of the language. I loved the lines 'The wings inside your dreams
The seams inside these winds' and 'Of infectious beauty with
Sleeping a slumber of
Placid trees and rolling thunder ', good work =] -
well this is inspiring.. i could read this over and over again but im not going to because you have other works that id like to check out.. good poem, very well written, so suddle
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such a beautiful well written poem!!! I adore it! good luck in my contest!
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Unique
Uncommon take on what I would anticipate to be inspired from the picture given. Depth of soul is reflected in the turn of your words. Your eyes see more. Admirable!
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