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Erika Foley - Alberta, Canada



Words and thoughts, through this book
we share with all who read
from us to all of you
sentiments we concede
trust you like poetry
deep from our hearts to yours
musings sent especially
hope forever it endures


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first verse in the over 150 that were written for this record breaking poem

Grannyeri

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  • intanglio2ring
    August 14, 2007
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    Glad you did well!

    Mine was DQ'd
    Tang


  • HeavenScent4U
    August 14, 2007
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    wonderful sentiments in your word sweet soul and your words end with hope wonderful addition to the tapestry. be well and be blessed

    for your addition to the tapestry, do you think please you could put your real name and your location as TITLE of your poem? if you are from USA please put state, if not, please put country thank you

  • tara wilson gold member
    August 14, 2007

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    This is perfect....what beautiful words you have found within to begin a book of poetry....wonderful verse!


  • tawk gold member
    August 11, 2007

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    Wow, such a beautiful and heartfelt write. Just amazing. You are such an amazing poet and I am glad that our paths in life have crossed


  • buddyho
    July 23, 2007
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    WOW


  • Whoochi gold member
    July 10, 2007
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    well done Granny...always my pleasure to read anything by you!

  • piccola silver member
    July 10, 2007
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    I really like this rhyme and the thoughts expressed


  • sunny day
    July 10, 2007

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    Eri, I expected nothing less than beauty from your golden pen. Left standing to applaud you for all you share with us. You have a true poet's heart. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce


  • earthstar
    July 10, 2007

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    trust you like poetry
    deep from our hearts to yours
    musings sent especially
    hope forever it endures

    I love these lines. It awesome they made me smile. Leave a smile. It radiates hope to all. Thank you for sharing these lines with us. They were a joy to read.


  • Lady Altheia
    July 9, 2007

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    Rhis is nice and it describes you to a tee. You are one of the legends here on AllPoetry. I enjoy your poetry.


  • WhisperingSpirit
    July 9, 2007

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    Wow absolutly beautiful, and of your words I smile.
    This is heart warming, such few words that mean so very very much. Thank Youfor sharing My Friend


  • Janice M Pickett
    July 9, 2007
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    OH YES an excellent start.

    Very nice beginning. But I expect that from such great poets.

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