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My Angel

All my life
I've search to find,
a woman such as you.

I've traveled all
around the world,
but no one had a clue!

Where's the "ANGEL"
that I seek?
Please tell me where to find.

The woman with
the heart of gold,
who's also sweet and kind.

I went and searched
The Orient,
But she could not be found.

I also searched
the Middle East,
But she was not around.

Russia, Asia
Borneo!
Where else might she be?

After traveling
around the world
The truth I'd finally see!

I never had to
leave the "STATES"
"FOR MY ANGEL'S HERE WITH ME!"













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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    July 12, 2007

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    This is such a brilliant poem. I loved reading through it and the ending was lovely. It is such a wonderful feel good poem. And congratulations on being an honorable winner. Great work.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    July 10, 2007

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    Congratulations

    So pleased to see a trophy on this wonderful piece. Well done my friend. Great job! ~Pamela


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 10, 2007

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    this is a oscar piece i hope you re enter it for another contest and strike gold this is so so damn beautiful i love it damn this is hot kenneth i love you daddy beautiful piece


    • kennethlaney
      July 10, 2007
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      See if you were near, I could come and read you poetry all evening, cook you a nice dinner, Give you a nice massage and rock you to sleep.


  • ThedarknessIFeel
    July 10, 2007

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    Cute i really liked this well i just had a tragic accident with my friend so i might not be on now and then so ill ttyl good write!
    Darkness


  • LadyLeviathan silver member
    July 9, 2007

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    awww such a sweet poem! great job with using the angel for your inspiration! it was beautiful. good luck in my contest!

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