All my life
I've search to find,
a woman such as you.
I've traveled all
around the world,
but no one had a clue!
Where's the "ANGEL"
that I seek?
Please tell me where to find.
The woman with
the heart of gold,
who's also sweet and kind.
I went and searched
The Orient,
But she could not be found.
I also searched
the Middle East,
But she was not around.
Russia, Asia
Borneo!
Where else might she be?
After traveling
around the world
The truth I'd finally see!
I never had to
leave the "STATES"
"FOR MY ANGEL'S HERE WITH ME!"
A contest entry
- INSPIRATION by LadyLeviathan.
385 points, ended August 22, 2007, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is such a brilliant poem. I loved reading through it and the ending was lovely. It is such a wonderful feel good poem. And congratulations on being an honorable winner. Great work.


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Congratulations
So pleased to see a trophy on this wonderful piece. Well done my friend. Great job! ~Pamela


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this is a oscar piece i hope you re enter it for another contest and strike gold this is so so damn beautiful i love it damn this is hot kenneth
i love you daddy
beautiful piece


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See if you were near, I could come and read you poetry all evening, cook you a nice dinner, Give you a nice massage and rock you to sleep.
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Cute i really liked this well i just had a tragic accident with my friend so i might not be on now and then so ill ttyl good write!
Darkness

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awww such a sweet poem! great job with using the angel for your inspiration! it was beautiful. good luck in my contest!
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Angel
Thank you Ms Pina,
"BOO"
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