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Foaming beads of
glossy, metallic shells
bursting with colorful
character. To me, a truly
beautiful element...
speaking in a whisper.
~*~
Author notes
Prompt: bubbles
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by GoddessHella.
450 points, ended July 9, 2007, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 500 Entry Contest!!! ~BE EXTRA SURE TO READ RULES!!~ by kiwikrazi37.
1040 points, ended August 21, 2007, 131 entries
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This is sooo cute!
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a poem about bubbles! very creative! short, sweet, and simple. I love it. its filled with imagery tooo. keep up the most awesome wrting. -Tay-
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Ooh, bubbles! I like bubbles!
Nicely written, but you definitely ahd to tell me what it was about, cause I had no idea. Maybe you should title it bubbles? idk Nicely done! 
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Woww... beautifully pictured. i Wonder why i don't see a trophy around. Great poem anyway. Every word in this sparks something very elegant. Keep it up.
Luv,
Candy
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Wonderful poem I like it a lot.
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Thanks
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Cute write! Great imagery. Well written. Best wishes to you.
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Thx
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oo very nice. i like it very much great job with the prompt. much love and good luck. thank you for evtering the contest.
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