Mirror mirror on the wall
Tell me do i see any eyes at all
This face i see doesn't seem like mine
Yet it's working it's way so far inside
Reaching through the walls to get to you
I only ran away for something to do
Now the world has drained of colour
As we search longingly for one another
The buildings grow and sway
How can so many Suns rise in a day?
Your head in my hands
As the mirror expands
We finally found each other
As my eyes force open i wonder why i bother
Author notes
Today i went to work : )
This is option number 3 in the contest
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A contest entry
- Just a few twisted options *new option + unlimited entries*... by AutumnsFlame.
450 points, ended August 2, 2007, 9 entries
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There are two minor things I'd like to point out--- "mine" and "inside" do not rhyme and I thought the last line had too many sylabols... other than that, great job... I really did like this... thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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