Swallowed
by the darkness
balanced
by the light;
life walked
upon grey line
{a highwire act
of beliefs}.
Cracked concrete
caused
spirit to stumble;
and self fights
to regain control.
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Great piece. Powerful message within. Love the imagery. Best wishes to you!
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you know, i think we all deal with this from time to time. stumble and fall and then try to regain control, if we're lucky, we catch ourselves in time
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry: Highwire Act
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Strengths I inhaled:
Love the message You have brought forth and with
each piece I will be inhaling...I look at message
within the lines...
Self acceptance is beyond important for that helps
keep-maintain the balance...
where the Light and Dark; one held in each hand
can walk that highwire without fear of failure...
but head held high with perseverance-success
Thank You for sharing this
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Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~Desire~*~
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I too have inner struggles my friend, so I can relate to this one...
Nicely done with the prompt
All the best in the contest
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another one well done best of luck in the contest and after this one i quit
yeah right, who am i fooloing, i have no life best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Beautifully done, can feel the struggle, excellent take on the prompt and just has a depth to it that makes it so meaningful. Good Luck in the contest and all the best to you!~~
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