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The Lovers



Sweat
        trickling
Between bodies
Fervently kissing
Grasping and clawing
Ripping at skin made
From a sensual notion
Born from sin



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  • ilovegeorgex
    November 2, 2007
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    really well written, short but really effectve
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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    August 29, 2007
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    This is really good thanks for sharing this amazing piece with me.


  • Florida Sunshine
    July 9, 2007
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    Nice job! I like it! sensual I'd say!


  • Griswold silver member
    July 9, 2007
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    Very nicely done for the picture prompt, very sexy and seductive write. Thanks for entering...Scott


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 9, 2007
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    damn, and I did not think it was a sin to enjoy what God gave us


  • Griswold silver member
    July 9, 2007
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    Picture prompt is shown


  • Griswold silver member
    July 9, 2007
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    Changed to 20x20 20 words 20 minutes, 10 isnt enough for what I want from you all.

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