The angel falls on bended knee
Naked, flying through time
Rythym pumping through her veins
Never stopping for long.
Crouching silently,
She catches her breath again
To take flight once more
Leaving only sparkles in her wake.
I saw her once, the angel
She tossed a smile my way
Radiance, beauty personified
Flitting away, in a heartbeat.
A contest entry
- INSPIRATION by LadyLeviathan.
385 points, ended August 22, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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And since that fleeting moment, you have been blessed with a mind full of inspiration and the skill to place words on pages of our hearts. I like this my friend.
well done.
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Thankyou for this beautiful comment my friend. Take care Xx
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wow, s'pretty. You never sound quite so sophisticated in person as you do in your poetry lol, it's almost like you're a different person!
loves x
yeah this is a great write; there is just enough detail to let a reader know what's happening, but also to spark the imagination into a new depth of... well, imagining. Great use of that.
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Awsome write my friend good luck in the contest xxx cheeky xxx
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naked, flying through time
my absolute favorite line today!
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babe you have done such a wounderful job on this poem
in your wright i can just see the angel
great wright really really
i wish you all the best in the contest...xoxox -
This is such a beautiful piece and the way you described the angel is wonderful! thank you for entering my contest! best of luck to you =]
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Thankyou for your comment, it is greatly appreciated. Take care Xx
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