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I Hate Loving You

Anger is becoming of me,
darling it's the only thing I wear well.
Those lovely little lies you told were swell...
But they always come back to bite me in the ass.
You told me that Im beautiful,
although we all know thats not true.
Darling I hate loving you.
Your deep serious eyes
melt me away.
Everything you do, everything you say,
effects who I am trying to be.
You control me,
you turn me into mush.
Without you around,
Theres so much I can do,
but so much more I'd rather not.


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Love and Hate
"♥ dancing on your grave ♥"


Well i dont know what this is,, i thoug i could make one, but i got per occupyed,, sorry

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  • On Frail Wings.
    July 9, 2007

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    i really like this one. its deep. i know the feeling exactly. there are some people you can't help but love and at he same time can't help but hate that you love them. anyway nice write. finalist


  • Atrophya
    July 9, 2007
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    i love this babe, this fucking kicks ass. you rock!! =]