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Preditor

I COULD KILL YOU, YOU DONT EVEN KNOW

I COULD KILL YOU FAST OR SLOW

TAKE MY TIME OR MAKE IT QUICK

YOUR LIFE TO ME IS NOT WORTH SHIT

I COULD KILL YOU, YOUR A SHEEP

I COULD KILL YOU, YOUR SO WEAK

CAUSE IM A WOLF AND YOUR MY PREY

GET ON YOUR KNEEZ BITCH FUCKIN BEG

I COULD KILL YOU, SCREAM IN FEAR

I COULD KILL YOU, NO ONE WILL HEAR

SO GO AHEAD BITCH SCREAM AND SHOUT

YOU'LL STILL DIE SO HAVE NO DOUBT

THAT I COULD KILL YOU IF I WISH

CAUSE IM A PREDITOR PUSSY BITCH

BUT DON'T WORRY TODAY YOU LIVE

MY BLOOD THIRST NEED NOT BE QUENCHED

BUT TOMMOROW IS ANOTHER DAY

SO BITCH BELEIVE ME WHEN I SAY

STAY CLEAR OF ME AND YOUR STAY WELL

OR I'LL SEND YOUR SOAL TO FUCKING HELL

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  • shes a maneater
    July 12, 2007

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    wow i really liked this poem. it kind of reminded me of eminem's music. its kinda like one of those things you hear mr. moviefone say during the previews of a scary, twisted movie. kudos


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    July 9, 2007
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    DAMN!!!!

    THIS MADE MY SKIN CRAWL!!! THIS WAS HOT AS FUCK! Just the whole idea of it, wow.....very well written and full of emotion. I adore it. Quite twisted which is what attracted me to it to begin with. I only comment on poems i like, so that in itself is saying something. KUDOS!

    • drowning from within
      July 12, 2007
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      check it out

      my new poem is called keep my heart its twisted like all my poems hope you like it


  • Aquamarine.
    July 9, 2007

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    dang you musta been realllllllly mad when you wrote this.....you know the contest judges nickname is sheep i found that quite funny... love the poem tho hun


  • On Frail Wings.
    July 9, 2007

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    holy crap i love this!its awesome!an amazing write. i couldn't stop reading it once i started!nice one! im adding you to the finalists!

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