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Bottle of Emotion

Bottom of the bottle
Last drip to taste
Drowning in yesterday's sorrow

 

Next day to look forward

tip the glass high

to drown another day tomorrow

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Prompt: Drowning in Yesterday's

25 Words

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  • vampireblood
    July 9, 2007

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    This was really good as well. Again another piece that says so much within its brevity. Very nice job, I see you got an honorable mention for it, I can definately see why. this was great! =]
    ~~~Vampy~~~


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 9, 2007
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    Great take on the prompt, unique and it has wonderful imagery. Hugs, Bunny


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 9, 2007
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    Your Prompt is : "Drowning in Yesterdays"